Feedback for first draft

Feedback for the first draft of my animation
The class watched my animation so far and was given feedback on what they thought of it and if there were any possible improvements that could be made to it. I gained a various amount of points from each person, which can be very useful to my development of my animation.
Layla:
It’s weird switching from pictures to video footage.
Will be batter once sound has been included
Cool pictures – like it
May need to flow more
Good effort
Like it when the boy was sat on the sofa with the dog
Sophie:
too jolty
clever how you did it
amazing effort
Becky:
smother editing needed
need sound
Good and different idea
Mr Turner:
More clever ideas needed like the characters watching the PSP film on the sofa with the dog next to him
Range of camera shots needs extending- even though some sequences are there, you need to have a better shot reverse shot sequence for the dialogue.
Must explore close ups
Music?
Interacting with the environment is good- more of them!
Sam:
Less jolty actions possibly needed
Better lighting needed possible as some seems were a little too bright
Maybe some music in some areas of the film?
It was a little crowded in some areas of the film
Larger range of shots?
Very clever, must have taken you ages
Good interaction
Rosie:
Shots could be smoothed together, bit jumpy
Good idea- looks like you spend lots of time on it
Redo pictures in some areas as they are unfocused and fuzzyAll of these points are very useful to me and will help me make my animation better when it is complete. And I shall consider these point, even though I understand the narration and audio needs fixing as it had none, but it shall have some when it